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She wears something new
every day.

Sometimes it’s a straitjacket, and
she’s near bursting to a
naked mistake.

Sometimes it’s too comfortable,
too easy. So baggy and shapeless that
she’s soft enough to be hurt.

Sometimes it’s hard, so pale and
instantly unforgiving, so cold it
makes you forget what the
natural flush of the skin looks like.

Sometime it is an instant
match, and she is all
you see.

Whenever she flinches or
closes her eyes like it hurts,
remember it is because
she feels another cocoon
hovering.

Whenever she smiles at you,
remember it’s rare, and remember
it’s only when you’ve
earned it.

Whenever she inspects the ceiling,
remember it’s because she
can’t believe she’s still
here.

If she finally reaches out, don’t push her
away.

Because it might be the
only time she ever
does…
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Hey, this is a really interesting poem...Fairly simple, but makes a statement...Excellent!
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Listening and helping. Great work.

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A little more chlorine in the Gene Pool please! :B

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:thanks:

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We have a mouth to say words...we have eyes to show whether or not we mean them.

Life is like walking on a tight rope...your friends are your safety net.
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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.

"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
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Hmmm. Should I bow? XD :thanks: 4 the :+fav:!

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We have a mouth to say words...we have eyes to show whether or not we mean them.

Life is like walking on a tight rope...your friends are your safety net.
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Go ahead, you earned it!

Welcome!

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"Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person." --F. Scott Fitzgerald.

"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." --E.L. Doctorow.
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This is amazing :] I can't even describe how much I love it. But I do XD

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Procrastinators unite... Tomorrow.

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Cool. I wrote it in 1st person @ first but then switched because that made it more universal

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We have a mouth to say words...we have eyes to show whether or not we mean them.

Life is like walking on a tight rope...your friends are your safety net.
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I think it works really well in 3d :]

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An apple a day keeps anyone away if you throw it hard enough.

Procrastinators unite... Tomorrow.

In the beginning, the universe was created. This made a lot of people very angry, and has been widely regarded as a bad idea.
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