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lounge car

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Literature Text

Wrap me up in silver lining,
Tie me twice with
Golden string

Carry me up the
Narrow stairs
And let our love story
Begin…

I'm just a girl who reads
Romantic books by the armful
From the city's chrome library,
Just someone who pulled her first pair
Of pantyhose
(from the drugstore)
On in a wobbly dressing room,
(so distracted I left the box)

You're just a man,
Talking about your
Acres of apple orchards,
Your lakes and your business
Wondering what you
Can still work for,
Fiddling with your iPod,
Fiddling with your coffee cup

I think life is
Overrated,
You think it's
Too easy

A hundred years ago
There'd be wicker chairs
And a balcony,
And we would be smoking
Long cigarettes

Minors could drink
Champagne and no one would
Even blink

You'd have a suit
with a handkerchief
In the pocket, waiting
For something new

I'd be wearing a
Scandalous little black dress,
Snuck from the downstairs to
The luxurious lounge car where you
Are

We both wear jeans now,
But we can remember
What it was like

Even if we were
Never there
So I was on a train to Oregon yesterday. They still have "dressing rooms", which have a mirror, sinks, two chairs, and a cute little stool. No one else was in there. Anyway, I found a box of pantyhose on the floor(empty), and it sort of inspired this poem.
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VintageIsabel's avatar
This is an amazing piece of work. I love your ideas, because I think the images and feelings you represent here are felt by romantics all over the world. A very finely executed fairytale, condensed into 11 stanzas. :love: